A suggestion regarding the cable:
If you make the instructions for the C4F to be:
sl 4 st t cn, hold to front, yo, s1k2p,yo; sl left st from cn to left needle, p1, yo, sl3 from cn to left, s1k2p, yo
then you can realign rows 7 and 20
your description in the pdf uses 7 stitches but only makes 5.
I'm assuming it should match the row below and above only with the cross.
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