This is a really old thread. It might be best to start a new one so your questions get the attention they deserve. I don't have the book or the pattern, someone else who currently posts here might, but maybe if you can say specifically what you're having a problem with, give a line or two of the pattern, it will be easier to help you. Meanwhile, I used this video when I learned entrelac in the round and will go back to it when I do it again. You might find something helpful in it.
Entrelac in the Round / Seamless Entrelac
I'm actually thinking I'll do a pair of entrelac socks for my granddaughter so this is of interest to me also.