Yours came out great. I made a bunch of them and gave them out to friends and family. I kept two for our house. They are very easy to make and are adorable.
I really like making these, I've made three so far. One turned into a dog toy though, which then turned into a big pile of orange yarn but oh well.
I started out making it with DP needles but oh man it was ugly. Ladders like crazy! I got mad and said well, time to to try magic loop. It's like a miracle! It works so well!