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Old 11-16-2009, 04:14 PM   #1
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A Short Story For Anyone Interested
Just popping in for a quick hello! I haven't had much online time of late, but I did manage to write a short story over the weekend and just published it online.

If anyone is interested, it can be found here: http://masonm.joeuser.com/article/369288/Old_Dog

It isn't a great piece of work, but I enjoyed writing it. I hope some will enjoy it.

Back to the road.
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Old 11-16-2009, 05:17 PM   #2
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Mason, that was a great story. Very descriptive, too. You can feel yourself in the diner with them. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.
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Wow, Mason, just wow! It's a wonderful, sad story! There's just enough description to allow the reader to "see" the setting, the characters, and enough to make the reader wonder how much of the story actually reflects the author's life, without the story being lost to description. And, the story comes full circle. I'm not left feeling something was missed or there's an unanswered question; the story has resolution.

I must admit, my eyes began welling up there at the end. A truly well written story indeed!
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Old 11-16-2009, 06:28 PM   #4
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Nicely done!
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That was a great story and Mason, please be careful out there.
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Wow!!! But I am not surprised that you can write so well. I have read a lot of your postings both here and on your blog. You have the talent to make everyday happenings sound very interesting. Congratulations.
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Great story. And I know how those mountains are.
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I must admit, my eyes began welling up there at the end.
Thank you very much. That was exactly what I was going for.
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oh my Mason
It is a gripping story you are a talented soul.
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